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5 girls, 1 boy and the story that taught them all about life. Jayson was raised in a dangerous, fear nothing enviroment where he learned the ways of street. Esmerelda. Alexandria, Neala, Ma...
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Operation: Gemstone
(#) fruit_addict 2007-11-12
good beginning. sounds well thought out. I could only find one spelling mistake and at one point some of your words switched places. also I'm trying to figure out if, "lithe" is a spelling mistake or a word I don't recognize.
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