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• Crimson Edge

  (#) bellashade 2008-01-26

  this is intresting with the comments about the plagarism aimed at dethlok i was expecting naruto to know exactly whats going on as soon as he summoned benihime but he doesn't, i'm intrested to see how kisuke ended up as naruto was he natural reincarnated or did you and dethlok (And various other people since i've seen the idea more than once before) have the same idea about the shinigami actually becoming Naruto.
  
  I liked the way Naruto reacted to Kakashi i was cheering him on and his deal with Ebisu is something i've never seen before but then i've never seen Sakura facing anyone except Ino in the chunnin exams nor her getting thrown in hospital afterwards either.
  
  it'll be intresting to read the rest of this story and see what happens and to see how Urahara became Naruto.
  
  

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  (#) tenchuu 2008-01-26

  I read the story and thought it was good, plus update soon and why cant you post this in Fanfiction I dont really see any scenes too adult or anything similar to that. Can't wait for more and good luck.

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  (#) yesbutter12 2008-01-27

  great i love what you have done with this story i can hardly wait to read the next chapter this is truly a one of a kind fic

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  (#) cloud1239999 2008-02-05

  Strong, flowing, compelling. All things that I like in anything I read, and you have it all in this story. I congratulate you on your great work. Even if Naruto is slightly OOC with his anger-spree I feel that it was well done and within reason enough that it doesn't defect from the story at all.
  
  I look forward to seeing more of this story. Keep up the excellent work.

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  (#) refused 2008-02-12

  Awesome.
  
  If I'm not mistaken, you go by the pen-name of Case13 on FFN.
  
  I read so somewhere, at least.
  
  You should probably consider posting this here, it'd probably get lots and lots of more hits and... well, this story deserves to get read a lot.

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  (#) chaceitsryan 2008-02-19

  the story its self has become awsome itself i wonder what you would do in this crossover i mean since it is at least one bleach character should be in it just so it can be a bit more crossover but other than that its perfect

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  (#) horus501 2008-02-28

  great story its so amazing benihime is my fav along with kisuke i love how you did the story

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  (#) Ten-Speed 2008-03-07

  cool i have to say this is cool, can't wait to see the improvements made on naruto after a month and one seal less

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  (#) serhoth 2008-03-21

  This story like pretty much all your others is awesome. This is also the first time I read a Yuugao like that. Granted there are not many stories that use her, but the ones that do don't have her like this. And I really liked her, even if it was only a small scene. Cant wait to read more.

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  (#) Vilkath 2008-04-06

  Interesting stuff all though I do believe this same story would get more attention on more widely read websites like FF.net, really unless you plan a lot of lemon scenes later I can't imagine using this website. The search engine alone is so messy tons of good fics go unoticed.
  
  That being said the story itself is pretty great. One the best Naruto/bleach xovers I have read. Most of them lean to heavy in to the cross over, have naruto die and go to soul society but have tons of Naruto world people follow after him, or vice versa tons of Bleach characters in the naruto world. Very few blend it so well.
  
  I do question what is happening to Naruto, the seal and such. Nothing really bene revealed on that detail. Is his chakra all gone, has he reached some sort of half death state where he has reitsu now? If he gets the 5 point seal removed like normal what will happen?

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