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Crimson Edge
(#) Storm_King 2007-11-18
This Story is so COOL!
I can't wait for the next chapter,and the one's to come after.Crimson Edge
(#) Everyoneknows 2007-11-19
Excellent chapter, though it lacks the action of the previous ones (that can't be helped during Naruto's training). I like the way you portray Naruto's ability and your description of the correct way to fight (very true by the way). Can't wait for more.Crimson Edge
(#) Kitsune-Taishou 2007-11-20
This chapter was pretty cool, very emotional. It was funny how Naruto and Yugao met then got along. Anyway keep up the good work and update soon please. Thanks.Crimson Edge
(#) Dumbledork 2007-12-01
One of my favourite Naruto stories. I enjoy each new chapter.Crimson Edge
(#) Oblivion12 2007-12-18
Another Wonderful Chapter! Can you please tell me if he gets use Blood Mist Shield? That shield and block almost all attacks directed on him. I hope he gets to use it against Neji and show that hyugga what impenetrable defense really means!Crimson Edge
(#) konradamkool 2007-12-29
A very intersting and unique story.
Well written, and I defiantly like your character interaction. Tenten and Yugao were great, and I also like how your Temari acted, as I could defiantly see her doing that.
Your idea with Benihime is unqiue, and I look foreword to seeing more.
I do have a couple questions though, if you dont mind:
1) Is there a pairing in the story? If there is, is there a chance that you could do one that DOESNT involve Hinata or Sakura......I just don't think it would go well witht he story.
2) This questions is more of a curious one....why did you choose to write this on FICWAD? I do like ficwad, but feel limited by it, as it isnt that popular so there aren't as many stories, and also few readers. I was just curious why you chose to use it instead of something like Fanfiction.net. I am sure your story would be very popular there, and you would defiantly get more reviews and insights then you do here on ficwad. Just curious.
Well, thank you for the wonderful story, I hope to see more. It is defiantly an enjoyable read that I will keep track of.
Till next timeCrimson Edge
(#) BlackColt 2008-01-12
I found this story after reading one that was inspired by it, and I have to say that as much as I enjoyed reading "The Death God, Reborn", this one blows it out of the water. Objectively speaking, Dethklok's writing is perhaps slightly better than yours, but the amount of raw emtion you have stuffed into this story is mond-boggling, so much that I had to periodically take breaks to cool off just from reading. I enjoy reading 'super' naruto stories, but the one thing i enjoy more are stories that really show his growth as a person and a fighter. If I were to make one suggestion, it would be to maybe start seeing the reemergence of his former personna. He already seems to be getting more intelligent and mature, but Kisuke was a absolutely brilliant guy, who could have likely beaten the pants off a Nara in strategical analysis, and it would be neat to see some of that relect in Naruto. All in all, a very satisfying read, I can't wait for more.
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