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Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile
(#) bindie611 2007-12-02
don't keep it in. Cause then I wouldn't finish reading it, and that'd be sad. :D
Otherwise, it's been a great story!!!Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile
(#) TangerineSky 2007-12-02
NO! IT CAN'T BE OVER!
I WANT MORE SO BAD!
YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER AND I THINK THAT PETE SHOULD TELL HIM!!!!
I think that Patrick should have been awake almost the whole time and known that he kissed him!
oh damn it. FUCK! i seriously don't want this to be over. not by a long shot!
Thanks for the story. You are officially getting whats left of my rating points!Author's response
o.o
i'm deliciously humbled.
thank you,kind person.Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile
(#) zildjian1039 2007-12-02
hmm.
tangerine,that's good advice.
i think i might take it.
:oLook For The Boy with a Broken Smile
(#) PatbtrthnPete 2008-08-02
i actually like this part, igf you ever read any of my stuff it's pat/pete.
anyways this helps explain the way pete is and i like it.
haha when you get on the next time you probably have 10 new reviews form me
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