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The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) koppe 2007-12-09
Great story so far.
Loved Sapphire... hope they'll (she and Harry) eventually stumble over some hiberanting eggs and the sound of her will be enough to hatch it... she'll need a boyfriend eventually. ;-)
I do wonder though, how happy Dumbledore will be for Harry's new pet (although Hagrid will undoubtfully be extatic).
Keep up the great work.The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-12-09
This chapter's subject matter seems unfinished. It's somewhat like a cliffie, which are bad. :) Other than that, I understand that people are nominating your for the crossover thing with Buffy, but she's not really had much of an active role in the story so far. It's really a long story and so far hasn't shown much signs that it's getting anywhere near complete. In fact, I would say that you're somewhere close to a half-way mark, based on where the story is going. Keep up the good work and I look forward to what you do next.
Geovanni LucianoAuthor's response
Cliff hangers are only bad for the readers, authors love them as they get lots of angry reviews, they are also easy ways to end chapters if you can not think of a better one.
You are right she has not had much of an active role though her role will increase further into the story.
That would be becuase it is not anywhere near completion and is nearer the half way mark.
As for the Eragon explanation, if I had not I would have people shouting at me and this way I prove as best as you can like this that the idea was mine not a rip off of elsewhere.
Keep reading and reviewing
Regards
GuardianOfLightThe Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Ross_the_Boss 2007-12-12
This is the best story ever! ^_^
This is even better then the actual Harry Potter series!!
Full of suspense
and
Awesome story lines!!
KEEP ON Writing!!
I'M CHEERING FOR YOU!!!Author's response
Thank you, I think it is a bit or an exaggeration but thank you.
I have no intention of stopping writing and there will be many chapters to come.
Keep reading and reviewing.
Regards
GuardianOfLightThe Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) pyrotechnicist 2007-12-14
great story
cant wait for more
update soon
xoxoxThe Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-01-16
Very good chapter.
gunny
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