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A different look on what would happen if Hinata ended up on the same team as Naruto and Saske.(A naruhina fanfiction)
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How lucky can she get?
(#) inuyasha67 2007-12-27
wow....hahha.....
ur soo weird!!!
hinata and naruto will end up together
thats wut makes it dumb
change things a lil bit
make it fun
like hinata and naruto is to normal
leave ur story the way it is butt
make a new one with more humour
not all romance and sex-warnings
make it interesting....
no offence its a nice story but its to mushhyy make it funny at least
like a messed up relationship that in the end it gets better
or a nce relation ship that sukks
or a relationship with naruto n sasuke thats thier gay!
MAKE IT FUNNY
OR SCARY
or a LITTLE ROMMANTIC AND A LITTLE FUNNY
all i hav to say is......................
FIX IT
How lucky can she get?
(#) Kurosaki 2008-01-17
Man dont listen to that person i fell in love with it ...it is an amazing story just hurry and get chapter 7 done :PAuthor's response
i like your style!i hope you keep enjoying my story!don't worry,ill try to post my next chapter quickly.How lucky can she get?
(#) Dakushna 2013-04-23
It's a little stale and I get no spark from reading this, sorry
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