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30 reviewsSir Nick's Deathday party has an unexpected ending, and Dumbledore talks with Harry
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When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) brad 2007-12-27
Nice slant on Filch! It's a little thing, maybe, but it certainly shows Harry's new maturity, and the view of Filch being ... nice ... is also a novel one.
"Brother Mo" ... why do I keep thinking of the Three Stooges?
In your "Dumbledore's Army" you held that ghosts had a limited 'death-span', that even their ethereal bodies would eventually pass on. But here you seem to be making ghosts' deathtimes more dependent on their mental stability? Can a ghost, properly motivated, live forever in this tale?
I hope you had a good Christmas!When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Clell65619 2007-12-28
Wow, great story. Draco really needs to work on that Bladder control... Though I guess Inbreeding will tell...Author's response
Yep, and so will cowardice!
"T"When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) gruvertd 2008-12-19
Excellent chapter and I love this smarter and more self-assured Harry. He asked Dumbledore the perfect questions that needed asking there at the end of this chapter.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) twistyguru 2010-05-15
lol!
Bravo!
Circular logic, meet hard, cold reality.
Bite me, Dumbles!When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) tricorvus 2011-09-10
Damn, was it this chapter or the last, where McGonagall made the remark about no Slytherin-Hufflepuff couples? Well, no matter. My better half & I are one, so tell her so. :P My Merlin, this is magnificent. And please keep having characters tell off the characters which need it so badly. And please have Malfoy wet himself again. :D :D :DWhen Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) taxzombie 2014-06-19
Loved the last part where Harry shot Dumbles down in flames. That was just flat out perfect.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) taxzombie 2014-06-19
Loved the last part where Harry shot Dumbles down in flames. That was just flat out perfect.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) taxzombie 2014-06-19
Loved the last part where Harry shot Dumbles down in flames. That was just flat out perfect.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) taxzombie 2014-06-19
Loved the last part where Harry shot Dumbles down in flames. That was just flat out perfect.
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