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The Whole Truth
2 reviewsYou really think you know the whole truth of Severus Snape. Think again! 100 things Severus Snape never said out loud but thought of. Please r&r! Spoilers to all seven books!
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The Whole Truth
(#) MrPowell 2007-12-19
has potential, but you need to work on PoV... try first personAuthor's response
Thanks so much for the comment and the suggestion ;)The Whole Truth
(#) wuzzybear57 2008-10-20
Interesting but like MrPowell said try first person. Anwho I loved the Narcissa Black part, lol. =DAuthor's response
Thanks for the comment and suggestion :D
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