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• How lucky can she get?

  (#) goku90504 2007-12-18

  wouldnt happen that way there was a reason sasuke's team ended up with kakashi

  Author's response

  Thats true.thanks for the tip,i needed it and I hope your a naruhina fan becuase i am.This is my first fanfic so im sorry if my story is not good.im not used to it

• How lucky can she get?

  (#) tara_li 2008-02-08

  An interesting idea, but so far I'm not sure what you're really doing with it. The grammar, spelling, and spacing issues makes it difficult for me to read.
  
  You're making what is, at least at first sight, a relatively minor change - swapping one kunoichi on Naruto's team for another. However, this is actually a fairly large change, which will affect things immediately - as will the change in Jounin Instructor on the team. Things like the Wave Country mission would change rapidly - Hinata's byakugan would see the enemy ninja hiding as a puddle, and change the way that encounter worked. Kurenai's focus on Genjutsu would lead her to see the possibilities inherent in Naruto's Sexy No Jutsu, while Naruto would see the possibilities of Genjutsu as applied to pranking. All around, the team dynamic would likely be much more healthy, and this would be good for Sasuke, who needs to have certain dangly anatomical parts shoved so far up a certain nearby anatomical feature that they poke out of his mouth.

  Author's response

  wow,thats probably the biggest review of man kind.But your right about alot of things.It's a small yet BIG change
  
  and what makes u think urs is any better???
  
  u dun like it? beet it...
  
  im VERY proud of my stories and no responce is gunna change that....:)have a nicce life...oh n i dun mean to be rude or anything but i dun likee it when people make bad comments about my stories....if your going to read them and LIKE them then we can be BFFL but if not...byebye

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