Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > Soul Purpose
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Soul Purpose
(#) crystalcrash 2007-12-25
Yay for the update xD
Nice chapter. I love Defne's outfit by the way! You are a great writer, i love how you set the mood and scenery.
Frankie is too cute in this story =) I just hope him and Gee don't end up in a fight for the girl... i love them too much to see them end up like that! Lol
I'll be looking forward for the next chapter...Author's response
Yay for the reviews :D
That's Frankie's natural cuteness, I'm just trying to portray it as well as I can. Really, he's adorable =) And so is Gee... You're giving me ideas, you know? Hmmm. Could I be so cruel and make Gee and Frankie fight for the girl? I don't know ;)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, too!Soul Purpose
(#) Lithium 2007-12-26
Honestly can't see how you had trouble with the dialogue; I personally I think that you did a brilliant job. I mean we can't know the band members EXACT speech patterns and such, but I'm sure we've all watched enough interviews to catch the general jist, and your writing seems to hit the spot.
I also love your original characters, and how you pay attention to detail. Defne is thrilling me, you keep mentioning her past in passing and I'd live to know more.
Hope you write some more soon, cause I can't wait to read it.Author's response
Watching interviews really helps me write better and also makes me smile =)
Thanks for the compliments, I'm blushing. hehe. I think I'm going to write some more, soon. Tonight or maybe tomorrow...
I like diving into my character's pasts, I think our pasts make us who we are in the moment. So I'm trying to give glimpses here and there to make you guys understand the characters' personalities better...
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