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• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) MrPowell 2007-12-28

  ouch... It looks like Harry just utterly burned Crouch. Is he going to support Bones?

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  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-12-28

  Hah! I think that ending ranks among the best endings (of a chapter) in the history of fanfiction. Maybe not, but it was still really refreshing.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) slickrcbd 2007-12-28

  Well, it's nice to see that Sirius got a tiral, but it seems like Harry might have tipped his hand a bit too early. Showing that he could take over the ministry wards like that means that they will start trying to find a way to take that capability away from him. Also, he could have used his blackmail material on Crouch for other things, instead of burning it so soon. I'm unsure if there were advantages or not to keeping Crouch, but the way he did it seemed like a wasted opportunity.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) irishfighter 2007-12-28

  Awesome chapter

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  (#) Cateagle 2007-12-28

  -Chuckle- Oh, nicely done. I loved the way he plays straight, not bluffing, and doesn't make promises he can't deliver on. I do think Crouch should've been a tad more careful, but, then, when have the stale but pure bloods really showed much common sense? The games he played with removing the Prophet -completely- from Ministry control were beautiful and I'd have thought that would've given some folk second thoughts.
  
  The final burning of Crouch was a most exquisite touch and I wonder how long Fudge and Umbridge will celebrate before finding themselves getting burnt? It should be quite interesting to watch them get it in future chapters.
  
  Meanwhile, Tom is searching for a handle that doesn't exist and I daresay he's going to find himself rather thoroughly surprised, unpleasantly, if he tries anything with "Barone".
  
  Great reading material, here!!

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Innortal 2007-12-29

  A few questions I would like to ask.
  
  Did Harry perhaps buy Dumbledore's properties from auction? I figure someone owning them who wouldn't sell them back would be a nice little burn?
  
  Has Harry not realized that the two Blaises he knows and knew might be the same?
  
  I assume Remus was at the trial in disguise?
  
  

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  (#) Snowdove30 2007-12-29

  I'm really loving this story. Loved how Harry got Sirius freed AND burned Crouch in the end.

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  (#) tmctflyboy 2007-12-29

  loved the chapter. im glad that he got sirius off free. look forward to more harry/blaise interaction.

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  (#) Pointer 2007-12-29

  Well, Crouch was warned about trying to influence the trial.
  
  Good one.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Coolone007 2008-01-01

  This has been a great story so far. I can't wait to read more! I am couriose about the Blaise issue. I hope Harry can heklp the girl before her mother adorns her with wedding tackle. That could be a great way of getting an alience between the Zambini family and the Evans mob.

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