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Chapter 14: Avenged
13 reviewsMuch to his displeasure, Harry is thrown back through time into his six year old body. As a result, Harry decides to contort the timeline, purely for his own amusement.
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A Twisted Timeline
(#) sparky40sw 2008-01-01
this is a very enjoyable story - I quite like Harry using all he learned in the other timeline to fix things here, and finishing the story to sink old Barty was definitely the right thing to do.
the highly original spelling and word choice does make puzzling out the meaning a challenge at times, but I am assuming that English is not your 1st language, in which case you do remarkably well at telling a story.
thanks for sharing your talent, I am looking forward to what you will give us next.
Warm regards
KenA Twisted Timeline
(#) GryffindorDragon 2008-01-24
If Bagnold is the minister, why is Crouch calling the shots? Why is she bowing and kowtowing to him? She should be telling him what to do, not asking him what to do or meekly offering suggestions. She would've ordered Crouch to set a trial date a long time ago.
Interesting trial with Wormtail. Different, but perhaps it could've gone that way. The question is would the Wizengamot put that much confidence in Veritaserum -- many stories suggest not. I'm not sure about that. Umbitch put enough faith in it in Book 5.
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