- The simplicity of many of your sentences has an effect of childishness which I think works very well with your story's theme.
I am always fascinated by how authors choose to depict Time Compression. Your descriptions of the phenomenon are very well written.
Your depiction of the sorceress as a child was very evocative. The eerieness of the child-like perspective throughout was the most intriguing aspect of this story.
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