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Bella Rising
(#) Vanir 2008-01-03
I'm sorry i didn't review the previous chapters, but i just had to continue the story. The Mama Pansy idea was just brilliant. What would they really do? I hope this.
The idea that Dark Lords are born out of stupidity isn't new, but you did paint a great picture of it.
The collaboration between the afflicted pair is just so great, and i love the respect they show each other. Putting them in the House of Hope is a great move, and the fact that Remus asked her about her feeding habits regarding the children was perfectly in character. I wonder what Harry will say to it the next time he pops by. I also look forward to the Sons attack on the House, with three shapeshifters on the premises. Odin gives the term 'ankle-biter' a whole new meaning.
Brilliant. I just spent my entire rating allotment on this story.
VanirAuthor's response
Wow, thank you for that glowing review! I love your description of little Odin as an ankle biter. If I had to go back and re-title this fic I think I'd call it "The Accidental Families."
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(#) selenepotter 2008-01-03
So you're making the Sons of the Serpent into Nott's gang? Did you get the idea from my Harry's Harem fic?
I think that makes a much better name than the deatheaters.
More!Author's response
Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing.
Um, I didn't intentionally use any of your plot points from your Harem stories, but I love reading them and there may have been some subconscious transference.
I'll happily give you credit for the concept though, now if you'll just write some more. . .
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