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Which One Will It Be?
1 reviewKakashi has to chose between teammate and pupil. Which one will he choose and will he regret his choice?
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It'll Be Our Secret!
(#) khalida-dae 2009-01-27
Interesting story and nice plot. It might work better in 3rd person past tense, instead of present. Present is great for first person writing (aka Grendel), but it doesn't lend itself as well to 3rd person. Nice job!
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