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All I want is You
(#) AshamedToRiseAndBe 2008-02-02
Lol bit sudden... u wanna go on tour with us... who wouldn't..
I like it so far
Plz update sooooooon
AJ XxAll I want is You
(#) kimmiPARALYZED 2008-02-03
This is great so far.!
More soon?
I loved it.
Great writing.
xx.All I want is You
(#) favoritexloser 2008-03-07
its nice and your plot is great.
but what kinda annoys me is your storyline and dialogue.
I agree, it was indeed all of a sudden that my chem asked the girls to come along.
but there should've been some contradictions or drama at least.
your dialogue seems too predictable and kind of dull.
but overall, great plot. it got my attention, which usually doesn't happen all the time. :)
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