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When Our Soul Is Gone, What Will We Miss?
4 reviewsA girl too much in love with a boy who's never there.
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When Our Soul Is Gone, What Will We Miss?
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-26
Oh...
My Gawd.
Are you serious?
No, you can't be. It's not possible.
This isn't real. Of course it isn't.
It's too incredible to be real.
But, alas! It is!
By the first sentence, you captured me. You made my breath hitch and my fingers tremble.
Despite the fact that this covers A LOT of who I am, your writing is indescribable.
This was so emotive; capturing the very essence of 'Sarahs' emotions. You gave a real feel to how she was feeling and it seemed far too realistic. It was amazing.
It was as though, this could actually be a letter to Patrick, written by a distressed girl with no self-esteem.
I am favoriting and rating as well.
I'll be reading more from you. :]When Our Soul Is Gone, What Will We Miss?
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-26
Gahhh.
I wish I could rate.
But, alas, I cannot.
For I do not have any more rating points to spare. :[
But, I assure you that once they refill, I'm coming straight to this one-shot and rating. :]When Our Soul Is Gone, What Will We Miss?
(#) outxofxstyle 2008-07-02
This is AMAZING.
Seriously.
This sounds exactly like my town, and my life.
I wish I could express my life as well as you just expressed it.
I loved it so much, I had to reread it. x)
When Our Soul Is Gone, What Will We Miss?
(#) xcharlottee 2009-07-07
This is really a beautiful piece of artwork. It's just so amzing, it really did take my breath away.
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