"His soul, his light, that shone like a beacon"
Aw. This was a sad one...great job, although those teardrops are threatening me.
Thankyou. I'm sorry, it did turn out a little sad.
(#) Alyss 2008-02-08
im sorry to say this but i had to laugh at the end 'he died', i realise it shouldn't have been anywhere nearly as funny as i found it...
interesting take on things, so true yet not
Yeah, I laughed as well. :D
I'm thinking Chloe with the dash, and Nick maybe...?
I liked the likening him to a lightbulb thing =) that was pretty cool.
I'm glad you didnt make it too soppy either.
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