Categories > Anime/Manga > Naruto > The One, The Only
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The One, The Only
(#) topmodel2b 2008-02-17
I REALLY like this story, and the way you write, and your descriptions are great and keep the readers attention. The only thing that i think that you should work on is you spelling. You have a lot of spelling errors and sometimes i can't figure out what some words are, so just use Spell Check and it'll be even better.The One, The Only
(#) topmodel2b 2008-02-17
I REALLY like this story. Your descriptions and the whole plot of the story is great. The only thing i would say that you work on is your spelling, like sometimes I couldn't figure out what word you were using because i was spelled wrong. Just use Spell Check and it'll be even better. Good luck!
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