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Black Heir
9 reviewsHarry's actual name is Damien Regulas Black, son of Sirius Black. He gets adopted by the Malfoy's, learns what it means be a pureblood,magic, and how to face his destiny. Slightly AU. Slight Dumble...
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Black Heir
(#) Nautilus 2008-02-14
cool, but i don't see why lily would marry james if he was peggers from sirius... but whatever, it a fanfic and u can make stuff up as you go...Author's response
Her and James were already engaged at the time. She loved James but she loved Sirius as well. She figured that she had better hurry up and marry James since she was preggers.Black Heir
(#) iamspammer 2008-02-15
Nice story.
But same questions as "Nautilus". If she were pregnant then why marry James? if she were pregnant AFTER marriage that's another story.
But like I said, interesting story. Now, if Lucius believes Sirius then he should take Sirius out of Azkaban too. That will make it more interesting and Harry will have his father. Otherwise knowing Sirius is innocent and still leaving him in prison is a BIG hole in story. Besides it's Lucius. He knows Fudge. He can convince him that he'll be more popular if helps bringing an INNOCENT out.
Just MY thoughts.
Please update soon.Author's response
Sirius was given the Dementor's kiss when he was captured. That is why his will was read.Black Heir
(#) rainbow2007 2008-02-15
I love your story. I wanted somebody to write a story with harry is love and strong. Cann't wait until next chapter.Black Heir
(#) Elfwyn 2008-02-16
Love the start of this story even if it makes both Lily and Sirius out to be cheating on their friend/betrothed. I mean why didn't Lily break up with James and marry Sirius?Black Heir
(#) Huntresss 2008-02-16
Since it started with a WILL reading I am assuming that Sirius died in Azkaban and wasn't just imprisioned. I also wonder did Sirius leave all of his well everything to others? or was something left for Harry (besides the obvious Potter inheritance) that was rather unclear. Also exactly how old is Harry suppose to be here (you had him in a days old diaper)
I like the way the story is going a loving family for Harry is just what is needed. You need to watch your tenses and pronouns... When you were describing what Petunia was taking from the cupboard you called Harry and it ... sinceit was from Narcissa pov... she wouldn't have done that.
keep up the good work I can't wait to see more. I've added you to my favorites.Black Heir
(#) silverwolf101 2009-05-16
i LLOOVVEE IT!!! harry living with Lus!! but one qestion how old is harry??? will harry join voitly or not?? is Lord snake face sweet or evil or just dark funny man...or not?? LOL!! ^____^ well hope to see more sooooooooo!! BYE!!Black Heir
(#) nympotter65 2013-03-24
I like your stories but wish they were finished please update they are original and enjoyed greatly
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