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Crashing Hearts
(#) snowqueendruscilla 2008-02-16
OMG! That bitch! Poor Casey. :( But at least Petey is there to help her.
I hope you finish the other story so that we can find out what happens next! :D
KatAuthor's response
Ever since these two chap updates i haven't been online. A lot of shit is going on again, but I'm letting go of it... I'm done with it. But yes, Closet Lovers will be updated soon. I have an idea for the next chapter, but I'm thinking it through before I post it.Crashing Hearts
(#) girlinthemoon 2008-02-16
Well, I’m grateful you updated. I loved both chapters.
How anyone who calls themselves a mother can treat their own child the way Mary treats Casey is beyond me. What a horrible excuse of a human being. It a good thing Pete’s there with her. I know Casey loves her grandmother, but she should never ever go back to Florida.
Author's response
A little insight to Casey and Mary... Sometimes the worst fiction, is the sadest truth. Casey is the lucky one who has someone with her through all of the stuff she is going through. Other people arent that lucky.Crashing Hearts
(#) girlinthemoon 2008-02-16
Oh, and I have a question. Is Irene Mary's mother? I'm sorry if you've claried that before. But I just wondering how someone so full of love like Irene could raise such a self-centerd worthless bitch like Mary.Author's response
I don't know how the Hell that one turned out either, but yes, Irene is Mary's mother, shockingly enough.Crashing Hearts
(#) patricksgirl84 2008-02-16
I'm so glad Pete is there to help Casey though all of this. I can't imagine a mother like that.
Great writing as usual. Loved both of the chapters. =)Author's response
Yes, Casey's lucky Pete is with her ^^ And yes, Mary is unbelievable, but sadly she is the way she is and no one can change her..Crashing Hearts
(#) DaniD 2008-02-16
I am SO glad to see these updates. It's on my favorite list, and I check it everytime I come to this site :D
Glad to see Pete and Casey back on track...and thank goodness he was there for that dinner. Her Mother is just plain evil!
Great update!
DaniAuthor's response
Mary is just plain evil, and I'm sure she'll never understand happiness. But hopefully Casey will. I had an ending in mind for this story, but now I lost it. It prolly wasn't good anyway. And no, this story isnt about to end lolCrashing Hearts
(#) TangerineSky 2008-02-16
EEEE!!!!!
OMGZORRZ!!!
O_O
I was NOT expecting that....
I want more sooooooon!!!!
Brandi~Crashing Hearts
(#) mooniexmisfit 2008-02-17
I'd slap her if she was my mother. I couldn't even imagine. I'm so glad you posted, truly fantasic.Author's response
You have no idea how much I'd love to hit Mary for Casey. Casey and I both. But hey, at least she has pete there with her.Crashing Hearts
(#) redballoon 2008-02-17
i DEFINITLEY enjoyed this.
geez, mary is such a damn bitch! im so surprised pete kept his calm through out the dinner and didn't get up and hit or, or at least scream.
and he was so sweet with casey! gah, i love this story so much!Author's response
Do you know how hard it was for me to have him control his temper? Shit, mine was getting riled when I wrote it. But out of respect for Irene's poor health, we kept it back. ^^Crashing Hearts
(#) xkilledxbyxdeathx 2008-02-17
ugh
what a fucking bitch.
but pete is awesome.
i would hav hit her.
=)Author's response
Yes, Mary is most definitely a bitch, and everyone would have loved to hit her, but I think I'm going to make her get hers, what do you think? ^^Crashing Hearts
(#) pyrotechnicist 2008-02-18
wow her mums a bitch
im proud of how everyone handled it.
theres no way i coulda been that calm
great chappie
xAuthor's response
Trust me, it was hard for me to stay calm also. I was ready to hit her through my lappy (Frank) but that would have hurt Frankie and I didn't want to do that. But yes, the woman is horrible.
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