(#) DarthRevan 2008-02-17I really like your story so far. Please continue to write it.
By the way, does anybody besides me find that Hermione Granger is dumb?
I mean Harry wants to make a better world and she disagrees him just because, whith Harry's means, there would be many dead. And? Doesn't she understand that both the muggle and magical world are too corrupted to continue to exist? Sometimes the end justifies the means.
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-02-17Very good, and I can see both sides of the argument here both worlds are very corrupted, but they both have their good points as well. Going to be interesting to see what all happens with Hermione and Harry next time, and how hard Harry will push the world to the edge before things are irreversible. Oh yes, I do hope Albus get slapped a it more, as I feel he still deserves more than he got.
- Oops!! It seems that the depths of stupidity know no bounds and, now, having sown the wind thanks to one stupid team of aurors, the whole world is about to reap the whirlwind. It's going to be interesting to see what happens and this reader fervently hopes that Hermione will become capable enough to pull Harry back from "the Dark Side" before he takes things to an irreversible point.
It's clearly time to "keep all arms and legs inside the car and hold on tight" as the ride really gets wild from here on.
(#) LadyGrelka 2008-04-02Wow this is a great story. I hope to see the next part of this very soon. Harry is truly dangerous I must say. And I think its wonderful that you made Hermione's power that of a phoenix (or at least to me it seems that its a phoenix). I really hope Hermione can get to the real Harry before he go too far.
(#) AKindOfMagic78 2009-07-03-head at desk-
The smartest witch of her year? And then she tries to stop Harry with force? I thought, she would have learned, that she can calm him down with friendship, loyality, affection, even love...! And then... she tried to force him - how /STUPID/!
Oh, nothing against the idea to extinct mankind - came to me several times, when I was watching News on the telly or reading a paper. Reminds me of a quote by Albert Einstein:
»Ich bin [mir] nicht sicher, mit welchen Waffen der dritte Weltkrieg ausgetragen wird, aber im vierten Weltkrieg werden sie mit Stöcken und Steinen kämpfen.« Roughly translated it means: I [A.E.] am not sure of the weapons for waging the third world-war, but the fourth will be fought with sticks and bricks. Well, here is a similar translation: http://www.fireandknowledge.org/archives/2008/07/17/weapons-of-the-fourth-world-war-einstein/ Ask a search engine and you will find many more ;)
Back to your story. Great thing! Wonderfully readable, although English is my second foreign language (so, sorry for grammar etc. here...)! I would highly appreciate books two and three :)
With a deep bow
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