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• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Vanir 2008-02-19

  snigger
  Heh, your Dumbledore is even dumber than mine. I like it.
  
  There's a funny feel to this story. Harry and Luna feels like real people, surrounded by cardboard figures. Hermione did gain some depth in this chapter, but the pair really stands out. Impressive.
  
  Vanir.

  Author's response

  Yes, that is a problem. I wanted to write a darker Harry doing what he had to in order to win.
  
  I like humor, and it snuck in; especially around Dumbledore and Mr. Lovegood. I hope this doesn't turn people off when it gets a little darker later.
  
  Thanks for the review!
  
  Tom A.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-02-19

  Very amusing update. I love how convoluted Dumbledore's tracking charms were.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) LabRat 2008-02-20

  Yep, the poor old bean is going senile.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) dogbertcarroll 2008-03-08

  "Do we have coordinates? Or just apparate and hope we arrive somewhere near each other?" Tonks asked.
  
  Kingsley objected, "Really, Tonks, must you always be so practical? If we spread out we can do more damage."
  
  LOL! I love the way this group gets along, much more human then the grim and dedicated group that most authors try and portray.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Jimm 2008-03-10

  Bill's "I. Am. A. Professional." speech was awesome! As was DD's tracking device.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) SomeGuyFawkes 2008-04-15

  Another excellent chapter, thanks.
  
  The sarcasm doesn't suit Mr Lovegood, though.
  Also forgot to address some important canon details (ownership of headquarters, wills, etc.).
  
  The "sneak" thing with Ron was great but that curse couldn't still be active or Jo would've had the same problem in canon. ;-)
  
  The interactions with Dumbledore were perfect.
  

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) ficbob 2008-04-15

  Will anyone smack Albus?

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) brad 2008-05-01

  I 'discovered' this here on ficwad practically by 'accident'. You don't have it on fanfiction.net?
  
  I thought the 'SNEAK' thing was very clever and a good laugh.
  
  Enjoying the Harry/Luna comfort very much, and pleased that - like your other stories - you've made her less 'looney' away from Hogwarts.

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