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One of Our Potters is Missing
18 reviewsHarry and Luna enjoy the woods while the Order tries to find them.
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Summer of Contracts
(#) Infin1x 2008-02-18
Nice, so I assume this is going to be the slightly less used senile Dumbledore?Author's response
I didn't realize how silly he started out. He's not totally senile, but I can't see how he could be presented in canon without being either senile or evil. So some senility will be there to stop him from being evil.
Thanks for the review.
Tom A.Summer of Contracts
(#) DrT 2008-02-18
Solid chapter; Harry and Luna's relation seems to be shaping up nicely. Wonder what they'll think of the rocks!
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(#) michaeljohn 2008-02-18
You continue to write a brilliant story. Mr Lovegood's assumptions are what a father would assume, but in the Lovegood manner, he doesn't act like a normal father would. Keep going with this.Summer of Contracts
(#) jmcqk6 2008-02-18
So i guess this will be a senile dumbledore...
I'm enjoying the interaction with Mr. Lovegood. Good work there.
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(#) Wonderbee31 2008-02-18
Great part here, and the interaction between Harry and Luna really continues to come along nicely. Should be interesting to see what all happens with the Order, how long Dumbledore continues to ignore all the evidence in front of him, and how they might try to find Harry and Luna and Mr. Lovegood.Summer of Contracts
(#) dennisud 2008-02-18
So far a great start. I really like your characterization of Luna and how everyone is reacting not only to Harry's dissappearence, but their slow loss of respect of Albus.
Oh and remember Hermione and Ron will help harry regardless of things. Even with him being with Luna!
Oh and as for Voldy-shorts, Can't he have a female 'period'???
;-)Summer of Contracts
(#) Clell65619 2008-02-18
- Dumbles plays with Barbies? And keeps Ken naked? Wow, it's so clear now.
- The bitter bite of senility I guess.Summer of Contracts
(#) stealacandy 2008-02-18
Well, that was... interesting.
The stuff that usually makes for a livid Harry or Mad Max, only without him being pissed at all. The wonder that is Lovegood!
Say, Tom, is this story your NonoWrimo fic?
moAuthor's response
Yes, this is my re-written Nano 2007.
Thanks for the review.
Tom A.
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