(#) Cpt_Frozen_Hotdog 2006-02-05O O
Uber spiffy! That was really good. A bit short for my tastes, but nonetheless, a nice story with an adequate ending.
Keep up the good work!
~The Captain has spoken
Author's responseDid not find the Respond button until now, I fail. Glad you liked it. I'm trying to get around to writing longer stuff but sometimes run out of steam after a few paragraphs.
- Oh my goodness, I haven't stopped by this piece before, and was muchly deprived. The poetry and rhythm of your writing is exquisite. You took the tiniest details of a mere game map and turned it into art, speculating on why and how, weaving together that strange forest and ice into something coherent. The ending is a subtle surprise, revealing the "who" in an understated manner. Perfect. I will never look at that character the same way again. That's what fanfic is for.
Author's responseMacalenia Woods was probably my favorite locale in the entire game (minus, of course, the frustration of chasing down butterflies), and I've always wondered about the Fayth. Glad you liked it!
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