Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > I'll never let them hurt you -
I'll never let them hurt you -
2 reviewsGerard is a vampire and bites Frank etc. (ive never written anything before, so just be nice? okay..)
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I'll never let them hurt you -
(#) TheSharpestLives 2008-03-03
WOW! This is a great start!
Update soon!
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Thank you so much!
(((:I'll never let them hurt you -
(#) Ellaquent 2008-03-06
You're pretty darn good! I don't usually expect that from people who admit to being new (never admit to being new, always pretend you've been doing whatever it is for years lol) but this is very nicely written.
I noticed one thing, and since I'm attempting to write helpful reviews this year and not just overexcited ones...
Since cause is an abbreviation of because it should really be 'cause.
Yeah. Grammar rules. All hail grammar nazis.
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