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• Summer of Contracts

  (#) NacNud 2008-03-10

  Great Story. Luna is my second favorite char besides Hermione. Love how your creating the relationship between Harry and Luna. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-03-10

  Really interesting update, it was nice seeing the background of the contracts before they were all signed, something that's sadly atypical in fics. My only complaint isn't even directed at you, but at fanfiction in general. It's really bothersome the way we only hear about marriage contracts on Harry's birthday, and it seems like everyone everywhere is suddenly thinking about them all the time. Just a convention I'm not a fan of.
  
  Looking forward to more.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Jimm 2008-03-10

  Exciting. I was enjoying the laid back atmosphere, but you segued well to the more action and serious bits.
  
  Great story so far, thanks for sharing it with us.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) jabarber69 2008-03-11

  Why dont somebody just empty an M-60 or hell just a M-16 in to that snakeface arse! he might be able to produce a shield that would stop a blow from a sword or maybe even a bullet but not hundreds of bullets hitting back to back! and to liven things up a bit throw a couple of hand grenades into the mist of death tweeters!

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) djo 2008-03-11

  Great chapter!
  Are we about to see some serious Dumble and Molly bashing??? Very interesting hint from her how to help Harry along with his feelings...
  
  I'd love to see a Harry/Luna/Susan ship here - perhaps Hermione would also fit in - just leave Ginny out of it; should be easy to do as Gran Longbottom already started the process for a contract to Neville which would make a pairing I could live with ;-))
  
  Definitely looking forward to your next chapters!

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Ashestoashes 2008-03-11

  Interesting and quite original plot.
  But I don't see, like so many seem to do, how you could easily go from this to a Harry/Susan relationship or even friendship. "Oh yeah, Susan, I saw Voldemort attack your home, but I didn't think it important enough to try to warn someone, because it was a vision like when my godfather died. Not that Voldemort had any reason to send me a false vision about you, since I didn't know you all that well." "Oh that's alright, pumpkin, Nothing important happened, now kiss me, my hero."
  Otherwise a good story (but mind the "Dutch capital"). I like H/L and H/S or both together, but please no Hermione. It seems like every harem or polygamy story recently has Hermione as the head harem girl, ugh.
  

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Vanir 2008-03-11

  Most engaging.
  You American by any chance? Being Scandinavian, i think i would have heard if Denmark had conquered the Netherlands, don't you?
  
  Am i the only one who keeps poor Amelia alive? Poor girl, but it makes for an interesting setup in the following chapters.
  Please make the adult Weasleys see through Dumbledore. i haven't seen that one yet.
  
  Thanks for a great story. It's a sad thing to reach the end of each chapter.
  
  Vanir

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Clell65619 2008-03-11

  The fight was very well done, and is the first time I can recall that someone managed to tag Tommy during a fight. Well done Amelia.

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) rijlkent 2008-03-11

  Holy crap!
  
  I didn't know that you had a presence on FicWad with a story nowhere else (that I know of). This is great! I just read everything up to here, and I find it really engaging and interesting. I love Luna, and like how you're portraying her. The relationship with Harry is really sweet and Lunaesque. I like Odd, and I liked Luna's comment about how he'll get silly when he relaxes.
  
  The way you're handling magic, the Chamber, occlumency, etc. is an original twist on ideas that a lot of people have approached. Great.
  
  I'm really pleased that I 'found' this and I'm looking forward to more.
  
  Peace-
  -Rijl

• Summer of Contracts

  (#) Felur 2008-03-12

  This is an another great chapter. The story has the potential to become one of the best H/L fic. Furthermore I am very corious, how you will solve the H/S problem. It will be difficult to create a friendship or more between them, because Harry failed to save Amelia. I hope, you can find a realistic solution.

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