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Alone in the Heart
1 reviewDisclaimer: Inuyasha does not belong to me(though I wish it did) Kagome is bleeding. Not from any cuts, but a broken heart. How long can she bear the guilt before she caves in?
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Alone in the Heart
(#) Iakugan 2008-03-18
Exellent use of character personality and habits. I thought your whole story over all was rather good except for the fact Sango sprung for Miroku sosuddenly that part was a bit unrealistic. Also Naraku would not die so easily remember he regenerates everytime you destroy his body and also you have to destroy his heart to kill him. Well anyways my Fanfic will be on Naruto. ttyl [M]arkusAuthor's response
Thank you markus, i'll update it again on the weekend i guess
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