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Axl gets stuck in back in time
3 reviewsGuns n roses our on tour,then when one day Axl gets struck by lighting and gets sent back in time.
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Axl gets stuck in back in time
(#) everlong 2008-03-25
I'm just gonna mention the same stuff to you again, although...this story was slightly better than the last one I reviewed on your other account, so well done on that. So yeah; spelling, punctuation, grammar. I know you write these for fun...but if you can't even write the intro/summary correctly for the story...what hope is there? Read through repeatedly before you post. Or just get someone else to.Axl gets stuck in back in time
(#) No_Leaf_Frantic 2008-08-16
What the heck was that? Was that a story? It was borng, and poorly written. Yeah, you may write these for fun, but at least take some pride in your work. I suggest getting a beta reader.
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