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• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Cateagle 2008-03-28

  -Wicked chuckle- Well, he did manage to survive Tom's efforts yet agin. I do rather like his response to Tom, with putting a price on his head; this is bound to cause hium complications as well as increase his personal paranoia. Beyond that, I loved the depiction of Ginny and Ron as totally clueless idiots, though folk like Killer Schwartz may change that, eventually and certainly the commentary of the Twins has to sink in eventually (though I'd wager it's going to take some severe snubs, putdowns, etc. to have any effect).

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-03-28

  There really wasn't a lot in this chapter that I didn't love. Killer Schwartz was, of course, the best of the best, as far as I'm concerned. The pimp cane got a lot of action as well, though.
  
  Looking forward to more.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Katsuhito 2008-03-30

  lol, a literal cliffhanger. you cheeseball. :)
  
  Anyway, as usual this chap was quite entertaining. Loved the bits with the contract on Riddle and Luna's and Ginny's intro to Harry. The fin and amusing ways that the DEs were offed was good too. Is Harry becomming a little crazy himself? The scene with LeStrange and the roasting of marshmallows seemed to indicate a burgeoning dissacociative (sp?) disorder. Killer Schwartz is somewhat amusing, but this one seemed too scripted (if you'll pardon the expression).
  
  Eagerly awaiting the next installment,
  -K

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Fyrecat 2008-03-30

  Amusing as always. but an ACTUAL cliffhanger!?! Ah well, as cliche as it may be, sometimes the oldest tricks are the best.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) jjracer24 2008-04-04

  Loved the cliffhanger, good stuff all around. Looking forward to the way Harry will over come old Moldishorts...he is going to win, isn't he? Well, I'm looking forward to the rest of this story, five chapter huh?

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) biged78 2008-04-14

  Damn! You couldn't write another 100 words or so?

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) GryffindorDragon 2008-04-30

  A real cliffhanger? I suppose that is a bit clever.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Dragen 2008-07-02

  Oh another great chapter mate, I love how the story is going and can't wait to see what you have planed next.
  
  If Kreacher behaved better and treat his master better he would be treated better, but it all down to the bitch of his old mistress.
  
  I do like this Weaver character, he wants to clean up, but he can't do much.
  
  I like what happened to Umbitch - lol - being turned into a tord she is and being feed to Vinny.
  
  I like what 'Barone' did to Voldemort, putting out a hit on him. Oh I love what 'Barone' did to the Death Eaters, though I think he has last it with Rodolphus.
  
  I like how Harry and Luna meet.

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