- That's so blasphemous! You're writing is oh so much better than you give yourself credit for. Your story is the reason I stayed on this site. And Yes! Beat that bitches ass with the door! Now to hit Patrick with something... I swear I'm going to hell for my love of violence.
(#) watch_the_sky 2008-03-31i absolutely love everything about this story although i dont believe ive ever reviewed it before. you're doing a fantastic job and although its sad your updates are so far between, they're still magical when they happen. keep up the great work.
- whew!!! an update!!! yea!!! :)
im so glad that you updated, i love this story so much!! im so glad that patrick is starting to figure his shit out, and that zaydee's not just gonna forgive him in an instant. he doesnt deserve it. yet. hehe
please update soon! cant wait!!
(#) redballoon 2008-03-31THIS was incredible!
those 17 pages are amazing! and so worth the wait!
GAH! i was waiting for patrick to just KISS HER at the end. i want to scream at him!
i understand he did stupid shit and he was completely at fault, but once the yelling stops...maybe they can go on from there!
amazing update, please do another chapter before two more months pass!
(#) pyrotechnicist 2008-03-31"Oh, someone was going to be in pain the next time she saw them"
oh, i cant wait
that bastard left her there with creepy justin.
me and my ninja squad wann kick his ass
anywho another awesome chapter
and i totally love u Po
hehe now just get off ur butt
and start writing some more.
no daydreaming about the 'k' man
calm before the ... fuck it
larger than three
lots of love and repsect to the o'keefe
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