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Crashing Hearts
(#) snowqueendruscilla 2008-03-31
This story is/was adorable, an even though I'm sad to see it go, I absolutely loved how you ended it. :D
Now I can't wait to read Closet Lovers again.. But I'm gonna have to reread them to figure out what's going on.. :))
katAuthor's response
Hehe, I'm glad you loved how I ended it. I'm not good at ending stories so I always fear when I do lol. But I'm glad you loved it ^^.
And yes, now that I finished off my main project, I'll be picking back up on Closet Lovers and Their Innocence... so you guys can see where those end up going ^^Crashing Hearts
(#) xStabxMyxBackx 2008-03-31
OMG....lol...I love when Pete kissed Trick...lol...aww, little pete, that's cute!!! i can imagine the sneer lol...xoxo!
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nikkiAuthor's response
lol I should have had little Pete do the sneer hehe, that would have helped it be a cute ending lol.
And yes, Pete kissing Tricky was yummy and it was the only Peterick in the whole 52 chapters lol.
But it was still nice ^_~Crashing Hearts
(#) GossipGirl 2008-03-31
that was ADORABLE!
you know I LOVE YOU
xoxo
gossip girlAuthor's response
lol I love you too ^^ And I'm glad you liked it! I'll miss making updates for CH, but all good stories do eventually come to an end, and this one hit its time ^^. Now I just need to finish up Their Innocence... and Closet Lovers lol.Crashing Hearts
(#) redballoon 2008-03-31
AH!
i can't think of anything else to say besides that this story is fricken incredible!
i loved it every step of the way!
-ally-Author's response
I'm glad you loved it Ally ^^ it'll be weird not thinking of new ideas for it, but I'll get over it once I delve myself back into Their Innocence... and Closet Lovers. Got any ideas for the two?Crashing Hearts
(#) pyrotechnicist 2008-03-31
omg i loved it
great job
Daddy’s crazy,”
“Smart little guy, isn’t he?” Joe snickered, hehehhee
awesome fic in general.
xxAuthor's response
^^ Notice that even to the very end I had the playful fighting between Joe and Pete ^^ I can just imagine those two always being like that with each other lol
But yes, I'm glad you loved it to the end ^^ It makes me happyCrashing Hearts
(#) girlinthemoon 2008-04-01
This was the perfect ending for this story. I love a good happy ending.
Casey and little Pete coming for the surprise was super sweet, and wonderful to read.
Pete as the happily married man was nice to read. I hope he finds love like this in real life.
I’m sorry to see it end, but loved every bit of it.
Thank you for taking the time to write this story. It had been such a joy to read. Each chapter has been better then the last. I truly enjoy reading your work and look forward to reading more of it.
Author's response
I'm glad the ending turned out good, I was worried of how it would turn out =) And yes, I hope Pete finds a love like this in real life too. He deserves it.
And thank you for taking the time to read all 53 chapters lol. It means a lot to me that you did so. You stuck with it all the way to the end and I hope to see you on my other stories =)Crashing Hearts
(#) cnharp 2008-04-06
AW! i loved it. I really liked the ending. Great job. I've really loved reading it, and i can't wait to read closet lovers again and can't wait for updates on that. Awesome job on this and i can't wait for some new stuff from you!! xo-cassi
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