- it always amazes me how writers take the basic hp elements and weave such wonderfully original stories; many, like this one, are better than jk's plots. i especially like harry's sarcasm and snark, which seem more "real" than his namby pamby reactions in the fics. and the action, oh ho! im new to this fic so i had to start from the beginning and its a wonder that i didn't pass out from how many times i was holding my breathing! now that im hooked, i hope you'll be updating regularly! read ya later:)
(#) angelqueen04 2008-05-02Wow, this story is absolutely amazing! There are so few 'Harry ends up in an alternate reality' stories that have this kind of caliber, and this one certainly makes it.
I was absolutely tickled pink over Harry pointing out to Dumbledore that he did not kill Lucius to sleep with Narcissa, but rather the other way around. That moment is probably one of my favorite parts (along with Alastor telling Dumbledore about Lucius' death as well).
This latest chapter is amazing as well! Harry finally had a chance to deal with the basilisk, but it seems nothing is ever destined to go smoothly for him. The rooster causes problems, and now Ginny has gotten her hands on the diary. I hope Tom didn't force her to kill Luna or something in order to get down into the Chamber. And I hope Harry's able to get the diary away from her.
Again, an outstanding story and definitely a favorite of mine. Excellent work!
- I just reread this story from the beginning, and I really enjoyed it the third time, too. I love a complex, smart and tough Harry.
I want to gently nudge you into telling us what happens next. Please? If RL is being unreasonable, then Of Course life takes precedence, but if all your muse needs is a gentle reminder...
(#) Meteoricshipyards 2008-05-16Great story. Loved what Harry did for Luna. I thought his asking Ginny for the book and then not following up was wrong. If it was still in her possession, he might have forced Tom to act.
Like other reviewers, I was wondering if there was magic stopping the roosters from crowing. Loved Harry's threat to the chicken.
Looking forward to more!
Thanks for the story.
- I love the story howvever i want to see some more things like Harry continuing to put Dumbledore and the staff in their places, some more Harry/Narcissa scenes maybe even him finding out about her using that potion, and please get some Harry fight scenes.
Update please this story is great.
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