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When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) sparky40sw 2008-04-07
more exciting plot twisting - loved having 13 yr old Luna explaining things to 3K yr old Jason - (especially since They Might be Giants' song Birdhouse In Your Soul was playing as I read this chapter.
I do hope that you save Hermione in the end.
thanks for sharingWhen Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) jjracer24 2008-04-09
good addition to a good story, looking forward to the next installment.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) brad 2008-04-11
"... but cried out her fear, until she fell asleep in Harry's arms" -- poor Hermione!!! :-(
'pornographic pensieve vials' - heh. Good one.
Enjoyed Luna's little chat with Jason. Wondering what opposite!horcrux you are going to have them come up with.
Actually, I've been wondering how horcruxes work. It wouldn't be something like freezing the aging of the physical body, I wouldn't think; I can't see how an external soul fragment would do that. Rather, I imagine the body would just wither and die, but the resident soul wouldn't pass on, but hang around, and so could be resurrected in another physical shell?
Wonder if they could make another body for Hermione and move her soul over? Since they have the technique down for that in your story.Author's response
I would think you'd keep the same 'shell' but over time, as the cells replaced themselves, the missing soul fragments would cause mutations to creep in (at least that's what happens in my fics). The changes are small for 1-3 Horcruxes, but greater after, ending with the pseudo-snakeman lookWhen Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) militis 2009-06-03
It appears that chapter 19 "End of Year III" is broken. I cannot get Ficwad to pull it up.
I tried to start reading the next chapter, but I'm very confused. Do you have this story archived somewhere else?Author's response
The chapter seems to be working for me now. It is on fiction alley, however, if it still isn't working for you
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