(#) dragonheart76 2008-04-16it was fun reading the first four chapters can't wait for the next few. loved the upgrade harry got in ch. 2 . it be cool if they got harry jedi/sith holocron o he could learn to use the force. love how the clones interacted with harry, could be alot fun seeing how those relationships work out. just 2 ? if harry is force-sen. does that make is girls also, and if yes will both harry and them learn to use it. okay thats it just keep up the good work and those ch's coming
Author's responseYes, Harry's clone are also force sensitive. Don't worry they'll learn a few tricks.
(#) BloodyTalons 2008-07-31Good read. Please continue.
I think you should leave Harry where he is. After all, he commands an army of clones numbering in the thousands and they all seem to have his abilities with the Force. This would suggest that he and his army are probably of significant numbers that they rival the size of the Jedis. You also have the fact that Harry if not more are being trained by the holocron of a Jedi Master (or is he a Sith?). Either way, the Jedi should probably send teachers to Harry and train his entire army. The danger isn't just whether or not Harry will turn to the Dark Side. The danger is whether or not Harry or any of his clones will turn Dark.
Author's responseWell the general fear is whether or not Harry is going to turn dark or not. The clones are just an attachment to him. Even if any of the clones turn dark, they still cannot turn against Harry or anyone else without orders. They are designed this way to ensure that the clones are independent, but not enough to turn against their own commanders.
- Well all reviews are from 2008, but it seems that the story is updated even in 2010 so I will write my piece too. Do you plan on letting Harry independant on any other forces (like Jedi, gov etc.)? I would prefer if he is force on his own (plus of cource his clones). Also, when do you plan getting Harry involved with Earth business? It could be interesting to let Harry scout on Earth.
- WHY? Why di you have to post pone it? I am waiting on pin's and needles waiting for the next installment. Please update.
On the other hand I wonder if you wil have harry take over the Galexy before sending him "home" or will you allow him to live his life then when you send him back with the clones de-age him.
Sign up to review this story.