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I Will Be With You
16 reviewsAn imaginary friend, deep emotions and a friend that doesn’t really exist is too much for a 14 year old. [[SAME CHAPTER; EXCEPT FOR THE IMPORTANT MESSAGE I FORGOT LAST TIME]]
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I Will Be With You
(#) xxMISSCOFFEExx 2009-02-28
God. I'm a loser. YOU MADE ME CRY! It was amazing, but sadly, I've used all my rating points on stupid, pathetic stories. sighs All were -1s. Anyway, if it's good enough to make me cry, then you're an amazing author. Props to you.
XO,
CharlotteI Will Be With You
(#) Life_goes_on 2009-03-08
Reminds me of... me.
Not that I have a Gerard Imaginary Friend, heh...
But I could relate to it, because I too have Gee-Gee OCD... I feel like I know the Narrator intimately now. Nice writing.
Teensy suggestion; A darker scenery would pull harder on the reader's heartstrings. Example being: A careless family would hurt more than an oblivious, stupid careing family. Maybe throw in a crappy house and some drug influence? Jus' sayin' ^^
And thank you for not using too much drama. Too much sappy, mushy depressing tends to have a backfire on the very readers who love that stuff. You used a the right words for the realistic effect, dattebayo =3I Will Be With You
(#) ShotGunSinner 2009-06-24
ahhh! Tears in my eyes! So dam beautiful and just...uhhhh i relate to this so dam much with the imaginary friends. its so strange but it actually happened.
Im rating ambiance :)
thanks you talented writer you!
xxI Will Be With You
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-11-29
Beautifully written, yah? You have talent my friend. Talent!
Not sure why I'm talking like this today but like I care. This was great. Loving the originality, the concept, it generally rocked. Sad, but not if you get my jib. Well done!
SFI Will Be With You
(#) MCR-99 2012-12-31
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!
mind.blow
I was actually listening to that song..
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