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A Tradgeic Ending
3 reviewsWhen Inuyasha leaves the pregnant Kagome, what will happen to her?
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A Tradgeic Ending
(#) gcbillymlover 2008-05-26
wow! is all i can say it is really good! very random tho its good!!!A Tradgeic Ending
(#) InuKag 2008-05-31
hmm.. first off... Tragic is the word I believe you are searching for in the title. Secondly, there seems to be no ... begining? to this story? It seems rushed and just a little confused. There are more than a few run ons but sometimes its hard to catch that, hell even I do that. Let the audience know whom is speaking, bring them into the frame and take them out.. otherwise its just a jumbled mess. Though these stories are ALWAYS overdone, you could really find some potential if you clean up your grammar and formatting and continue the story. Add a begining that tells us how this happened, why he's reacting how he is... and an unrushed ending that doesn't seem... 'dream sequenced'A Tradgeic Ending
(#) Kaida_R 2012-05-26
That was so tragic! Quick, but an incredible story. Fantastic writing!
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