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• The Accidental Harem

  (#) mwinter 2008-04-15

  Thanks for putting this here. Trying to search for every bit of it on Yahoo groups was begining to be a pain. This was a bit different then the one you placed there. Still good though.

  Author's response

  There have been a few continuity errors removed (hopefully, none added) and a few other minor edits. I hope that the changes were an improvement.

• The Accidental Harem

  (#) jabarber69 2008-04-15

  Hey I like your story, but I gotta tell ya I didnt like having to fix your story before reading it! Your margins suck, big time. I dont know if ficwad did it to you when you downloaded it or if you did it while writing, but go back and look most of your chapters your using only half the page and two chapters the sentences dont have any spaces between them, I dont know about other people but that just hacks me right off, cause before I can read it I have to fix it, and to tell you the truth I sometimes get pissed off while doing it and just blow off the story altogether. so please fix it before downloading it.

  Author's response

  The newsgroup screwed up the margins, and FicWad adjusted them again. I'm fixing things as I go. Hopefully the process will be smoother when new chapters are added one at a time. Thanks for reading.

• The Accidental Harem

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-04-15

  Very good chapter. I am liking this story more and more.
  
  gunny

• The Accidental Harem

  (#) Dragen 2008-04-16

  Great chapter mate, I love how the story is going and I can't wait for the next chapter, so PLEASE don't take long as I would like to see what happens next.
  
  So Ron and Ginny took the flying car to Hogwarts.
  
  Oh I like that Luna is in Harry's house, she'll be treated better there. I do like how Luna reacted.
  
  I wonder what house ginny is going to be in? I hope Luna beat Snape at his game.

• The Accidental Harem

  (#) GryffindorDragon 2008-07-15

  Not a bad chapter. But I don't quite understand the fuss about Luna's classes. The houses never have classes singly, and she's only one. They could easily assign her to classes when the other houses have theirs. Doesn't seem like the big deal the professors are making!

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