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11 reviewsFReRaRd:: The MCR tour bus crashes, taking the lives of Bob, Mikey and Ray. A very random idea. Please read it :)
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I Wish I Were A Ghost
(#) Pansy01 2008-04-17
Omg! Wow.
That's really well written!
I really want to rate it but I don't know what.
Original?
Moving?
it's always Gerard or Frank that is killed but I like the fact that its the others. No wait, that came out wrong.
I like the fact that it's so original.
I really liked the tombstone thingysss.
They were very deep.
So ... I think moving (=
Continue ay?
~AveryAuthor's response
Wow really? Omfg thankss!
Haha, yeahh, I get what you mean. There's a lot of that stuff going around.
I'm glad you liked it XD
Thanks soooo much for rating and reviewing!
AJ Xx...I Wish I Were A Ghost
(#) XdarelaughX 2008-04-17
Me likes. A lot.
Very well written and enoughly described (you'll get used to my inventing-wordness)
Please, please, please update as soon as you can =3Author's response
N'Aww really? I like you a lot :) lol
Lol, I have a habit of adding 'ly' to the ends of my words too. Its how we roll !!
Shall update soon, I shwear XD
Thank you soooo much for reviewing :D
AJ Xx...I Wish I Were A Ghost
(#) kitkatpwl 2008-04-17
hmmmm.....this seems really really interesting!!!
im so intrigued to find out what's gonna happen next, especially with your promise at the end! :)
It's written really well so far!
Loved the gravestone ingravings - cool and interesting. gave me something to think about - especially mikeys. good choice! heheh
update soon!!!
cheers
katAuthor's response
Omg! Reviews!!!
Skips around in circles, throwing confetti everywhere
Ahem...
Aww, thank you :) yes, I wasn't too sure about Mikey's tombstone in the beginning but it seemed to fit with the plot line. I think... ?
I'll update... when its not 3.38 in the morning, like right now :)
Lol, thank you! Internet cookie sent to you XD
AJ Xx...I Wish I Were A Ghost
(#) RosaSaur 2008-04-17
Aw, I like this.
Kinda spooky when little Frankie heard Ray talking.
It made me giggle when I read the comment up there -'I like the fact it was the others'
I knew what you meant, and I agree!
Please update?
xoxAuthor's response
I'm going to refrain from doing my 'Review dance' to respond to you.
Lol, kay sorry. I think we've all figured out by now I'm not what someone calls normal. :)
Haha, you think that's scary, you won't be able to sleep when you read what I have planned. Evil laughter. No, hopefully you'll laugh.
Haha yes, made me giggle too. She's a funny one ^.^
Thank you for reviewing!!
AJ Xx...I Wish I Were A Ghost
(#) _RiddleOfRevenge_ 2008-04-17
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XOXOXAuthor's response
This was a good scream right?I Wish I Were A Ghost
(#) lilrainforest 2008-04-17
Omfg. Sooooooooo many fucking people have review already!!!!!! Gah. I've been beat to it. Stupid internet dies and then I can't go on FicWad and all that shit. So sad that I'm not the first to review... let alone 2nd or 3rd but like... 6th? i think? oh well.
anyways...
ZOMFGGGG. I LOVE IT SOOOOOO MUCH!
-goes to rate-
it was awesome when you described it before but now that it's written its like HOLY CRAP THIS IS SWEET.
yes yes... i am slightly insane right now. 7 scoops of ice cream at school isn't good for a person.
I laughed about Bob and the 'none of that sappy shit' and omfg Frank is already "imagining" things. :D
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE !
I love it.
~Rayy (uber long review.)Author's response
Lol!! Ahaha, I think I just pissed myself!
Jokes!!!!!
But I laughed real hard (:
Aww don't worry. You'll be the first review in my mind :)
Rate? Really? Another one? Zomg! Thank you!!! sends a big internet cookie
BUT! I'm not talking to you! Grr.
Lol, yeah. Its a very ... uper long review :S
Hhaa thanks you for reading, rating and reviewing XD
I Wish I Were A Ghost
(#) KylaMonster87 2008-04-17
very well written but i did notice one error. for rays tombstone you have 1997-2006 making him only 9 years old. just thought id point that out to you. otherwise amazing and i look forward to an update =]Author's response
Oooooh. Yah! Your right.
I'm so stupid. :)
Thank you so much for pointing it out XD
AJ Xx...I Wish I Were A Ghost
(#) never0kay 2008-04-17
Your story was written with such detail that touched my heart and made me cry...but I sure do hope that none of that will happen in real life...not while I'm still young...I know someday My Chemical Romance will end but at least they made a difference in the world...
Simply amazing...your story, I meant.Author's response
Wow really? I didn't think it was that well-written but my viewers obviously apose to my thoughts. Sorry I made you cry ):
I was crying the other day, thinking the same thing. I really don't want them to break up but they have lives I guess that they'll want to start families. But their memory shall carry on :)
Thank you so much XD
AJ Xx...
Wow really? I didn't think it was that well-written but my viewers obviously apose to my thoughts. Sorry I made you cry ):
I was crying the other day, thinking the same thing. I really don't want them to break up but they have lives I guess that they'll want to start families. But their memory shall carry on :)
Thank you so much XD
AJ Xx...I Wish I Were A Ghost
(#) sydneyportela 2008-04-18
Holy hell child!! Amarzin fic you're-a writin' there...
You're a hella good writer, luv. I miss you so much ish not funny =/
-ur vampire ^_^Author's response
Nawww really? Shank you sho much :(
I'm gonna cry...
Yep Runs out of roomI Wish I Were A Ghost
(#) ThisSUICIDE 2008-04-18
Great story! Amazing so far. It's about time I reviewed one of your stories. (:
I thought it was very moving. Tears were welling in my eyes!!
But, I can't rate. Seeing as there are too many already. But still, +1 from me. I'll rate the next chapter. Because you're that awesome
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