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Landing on his feet
(#) toranosuke 2008-04-21
Great chapter, it was nice and long and you picked a great (if somewhat irritating) stopping point. At first I was afraid that Harry would end up running straight to Dumbledore and teach at Hogwarts but this is much more interesting. I can't wait to see what happens.Author's response
Thanks for the review.
Heh, I had actually written maybe 600+ words after the end before looking back and thinking "screw this lets end it there".
Thanks also for the grammar help, which has helped me improve a lot (though I still need to fix a few things, re-reading I find that I tend to repeat a word a bunch of times in a paragraph)Landing on his feet
(#) Clell65619 2008-04-21
- Very different kind of story... Dumbles is around, anyone else in this less than fluffy world?Landing on his feet
(#) Cateagle 2008-04-21
Hmm, 'twill be interesting to see just how things have been shifted in this new universe Harry's now inhabiting. I loved the surprise ending and it should be rather amusing to see just all of what Harry's required to do as their apprentice. Meanwhile, I wonder how Tommy-boy will take a new force appearing when he gets crossways with Harry (I doubt Harry will seek him out, but knowing Harry's life...)Landing on his feet
(#) GinnyLuvr 2008-04-21
Great chapter. I love the twist with the Flammels. What a riot!
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