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Motorcycle
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-04-26
Nice to see how things are going back home while Harry and Hermione are gone. Remus is Dumbledore's man, and will be interesting to see how his loyalties are stretched to the limit concerning the son of his best friends, and his vow to Dumbledore, and which might end up coming out on top.Motorcycle
(#) lycus 2008-04-26
That was intresting, it didn't have enough harry & hermione but thats okay. now as far as the horcruxes go remember you are in charge of the story now, and I think that you can do better than having them run around blindly, and moving around with the warlocks is a better solution then camping.Motorcycle
(#) godricg89 2008-04-26
Another great chapter...could do with more h/hr in it, but seeing how everyone reacted at home was pretty interesting...i think this is the first time i've ever seen a paranoid Mrs. Granger but it works!Motorcycle
(#) Cateagle 2008-04-27
Heh, I loved the opening with Harry & Hermione; I reckon they're going to get a lot more comfortable with mutual intimacy before this summer is over. Meanwhile, it will be interesting to see how Remus reacts and where his first loyalty is when things come to a head between Harry and the Order, or what's left of it. I loved the Granger's reaction and I don't think the Order is going to appreciate being treated with so much suspicion. I do have to agree that moving with the Warlocks to hunt the horcruxes will be rather more interesting than camping out. This chapter showed us some of the reactions to Harry & Hermione taking off for the summer, I expect next chapter should show the reaction of various Weasleys - my predictions:
Molly will be horrified at Harry going out and doing something for himself, possibly something dangerous, rather than sitting around like a good little child or weapon, Ginny will be very upset that Harry didn't ask her, Ron will be pissed that Hermione is with Harry instead of with him (Ron), Percy, if he finds out, will try and use the information for his advantage, and, like, Gred, Forge, Bill, and Charlie will cheer Harry on for getting away from everything and doing what he wants.Motorcycle
(#) TimeMage 2008-04-27
Very nice so far! You know i can see Bill and Fleur joining Harry while they are in France! :)
As far as horocruxes go, have order members searching for them and chuck them through the veil. Simple solution that i've never seen anyone use :)Motorcycle
(#) Cateagle 2008-04-27
I'll agree with TImeMage, it seems quite likely that Bill & Fleur will meet up with Harry & Hermione and co. while they are in France and that could make for quite the teaming. chuckle I wonder if Remus & Tonks will end up joining them, too?Motorcycle
(#) Coolone007 2008-04-29
Great story do far. I like to see poepl put Harry's paseltounge to good use. I can't wait to read more!Motorcycle
(#) draregerreip 2008-05-05
Interesting start for a story. I wonder where you plan to take it... start of a complete story with Voldemort tied into it or just a summer fling so to say.
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