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Elementary Calculations15 reviews
After finding his magic earlier, a decidedly non- Gryffindor Harry Potter plots his way to success.
(#) skytime12 2008-05-07i like consept but the story is a little slow keep up the good work
(#) IamtheBaneofmySword 2008-05-08I like this, but it's slow.
(#) Ldykiya 2008-05-13extreamly well written. I am enjoying a Harry who appears to be able to think things through for him self. He also seems to have more than a little slytherin cunning. I look forward to the next chapters.
(#) quill 2008-05-17I have enjoyed this universe so far and I'd like to say that it's a new slant on the old theme. DD has shown what he is earlier in the world and I'm glad that Harry is strong enough not to fall into the old man's trap.
Thank you for sharing this universe with me!
(#) quill 2008-05-17I tried this once but I don't think it went thru ---
I want to say that I really enjoyed this new universe you've created. It a another twist on an old theme but I love the Harry you've created! DD has screwed up earlier then in canon and your Harry is NOT a happy bunny.
I would like to thank you for deciding to share this world with me/us and I am looking forward to the further adventures of your Harry in this new universe!
(#) CrzyFox432 2008-05-18Great story. Really liking how you've portrayed Harry,DD, and everyone else so far. Keep up the great work.
(#) firelord 2008-05-23i just finished chapters one thou six and i have to say this is a fantastically written story please update again a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows
(#) skytime12 2008-06-10are u going to write more?
(#) hrksii 2008-06-21Hey, very nice work you've got here! Especially about HP's motivations, taking them outside the scope of the usual neutral!Harry fanfics I've read. Looking forward to next chapter!
(#) raspberrypirate 2008-06-25A good story; taking a fairly overused idea (that of Harry discovering his magic early) but making it new and your own. Interactions are realistic and well written, I particularly enjoy Harry's hatred of Dumbledore and his revenge on Snape. Quality of english is good.
Altogether, a well written piece!
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