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Elementary Calculations15 reviews
After finding his magic earlier, a decidedly non- Gryffindor Harry Potter plots his way to success.
(#) BellaxAngel 2008-07-29I recently found your story and read it, and I must say, I love how Harry isn't all (for lack of a better word)good like he is in the books.
I personally like the fact he, like someone commented before,is a realist, has a bit of a sociopathic personality, and is intelligent and logical. Also, the fact that your story isn't cliche unlike a few other stories I've read is a big plus. Anyway, on to other things.
I dislike Dumbledore, mainly because of the fact that he manipulated a few things to 'force' Harry into attending Hogwarts. I especially like the way you write Dumbledore because:
1. He was wrong about Harry.
2. He's a bit naive.
At first, I thought Harry was going to be put in Slytherin, but after hearing Harry's logic, being put into Ravenclaw does make more sense.
Anyway, before I start rambling, overall, I love your story, my favorite parts being the talks with Voldemort.
I can't wait to read what ahppens with Remus.
(#) frozendream 2008-09-23I really like this story so far and am looking forward to reading more when you write more. Thank you
(#) goku90504 2013-03-18v=ld...
you can be out of hear for breakfast,”
(#) goku90504 2013-03-18bp 180/120
Dumbledore will have more that me to worry about.”
(#) goku90504 2013-03-18over all a pretty cool story aside from a few typos i hope you continue it soon
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