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• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) Isebas 2008-04-11

  This was definately interesting to read. I actually thought you did fairly well with the "smut" scene. I like how he tricked Narcissa, now let's see if she comes back for more. I think the idea of H/Tonks is great but that's because Im a huge Honks fan. The chapter was a very good size and I didn't really see any kind of errors. I can't wait to read more.

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) ficbob 2008-04-11

  Good idea with the marble
  and that smack on the her ass as she was leaving was real funny
  Thanks

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) jimmyjrc10 2008-04-11

  exelent exelent continuuuuesss pleeaaassee

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) cj_cold 2008-04-11

  Nice story.
  
  I hope you do show a encounter with Tonks.
  
  Who was the woman who taught Harry.
  
  If you haven't picked anyone you could have it be Tonks. Maybe James was friends with Andromeda and she asked Tonks to fill in for her in this role.
  
  More soon please.

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) jabarber69 2008-04-11

  Hey good story, but have you posted this somewhere else, or maybe I seen an ideal like this somewhere else, who knows I read a lot of hp fanfiction and over the years the stories kinda blend together, but anyway I like your story, hope to see more!

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) HeWhoComesWithTheDaw 2008-04-11

  I can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) drago717 2008-04-11

  very nice. love how he tricked narcissa.
  and how he got around saying that lucius was already dead. he just promised that before he returned from the trip he'd be dead.
  
  i find it kinda odd that he didn't mention who actually taught him how to pleasure a woman. although it could be somewhat in line that if he didn't want the 'girls' to spread rumors he wouldn't either.
  
  awaiting more updates
  

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) darthme1011 2008-04-11

  i hope you pick tonks

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) Cateagle 2008-04-11

  Quite a good and hot story and I thought the smut was fairly well done. If/when you continue it, 'twould be good to see the backstory fleshed out so that we eventually find out who trained him.
  
  I'll be interested in seeing who all he's managed to enjoy at Hogwarts. I wonder how Hermione would react to see him avidly reading the wizarding version of the Kama Sutra?

• The Real Harry Potter

  (#) Oldwolf 2008-04-12

  Excellent story so far. Well written and acceptably erotic.
  
  As a fan of Tonks, I hope you do include her in Harry's conquests.
  
  I'll admit to being curious as to whom James might have recruited to serve as Harry's 'mentor'.
  
  One slight suggestion though. I would recommend adding an OCC warning to the beginning to keep potential flamers at bay.
  
  All in all, I look forward to seeing whom next falls before the Potter Charm.

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