While the Black, Gray and White is being rewritten, I've decided to write a prequel to it. What really happened before he disappeared after 4th year?
I hate to point this out but you described Apparition as Portkey travel... The hook behind the navel is portkey... Apparition is the feeling of being squeezed through a small tube.
Very good start. I like the set not only to the future champters of this story, but I cna also see who this might set up Black,Gray and White. I am waiting for new champters on both stories on both.
The answer to Flamel's question is that APWBD is in actual fact now a Dark Lord hiding as the leader of the light. There' no way in hell he can be a light wizard and leave a child for twelve to 13 years with people like the Dersleys.
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