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• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) Darksnider05 2008-05-09

  He's a bit of a cry baby really....

  Author's response

  Don't worry, I promise Harry will not be crying for much longer! In fairness though, Harry has gone through a lot of stressful things! All the people he loves have died, and his friends have betrayed him! Maybe you never cry, but I think that in this situation, it would be very normal.
  
  Thank you for your review.

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) JVTazz 2008-05-10

  Mostly filler for the last chapter or so, hopefully we get some excitement soon :)

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) DJ32 2008-05-10

  It is nice to know the crying will slow. LOL I hope you keep going it is a nice story keep it up.

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) Dragen 2008-05-10

  Great chapter mate, first off I would like to see all five of these Ginny, Rosemerta, Tonks, Daphne and Bellatrix.
  
  I love the cores that Harry pick, the last one was funny :D and I love th forcis stone.
  
  update soon.

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) Marshmallow 2008-05-11

  I want Ginny.
  
  And why did he need books if he got them from ravenclaw's vault. that didnt make sense to me.
  but it was good
  i liek it. i want to see where you go with this. maybe you can mke his animagis a pheonix? or he can have two? that would be so cool!

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) grim_kos 2008-05-11

  its hard for me just to pick one so i would like to see Rosemerta,Tonks,and Daphne. the story is good keep it up

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) GryffindorDragon 2008-05-12

  There's a bit of disconnect with the last chapter. We last saw Harry trying hard not to laugh out loud at the Goblin names, now he stops crying when going to enter Knockturn Alley. When did he start crying again?
  Nice staff (well, mostly)

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) Lincos 2008-05-12

  Lol, this story is definitely a most epic fail.
  
  Friends all of a sudden disliking/abandoning Harry.
  
  Letters from the grave about how NOT to trust Dumbledore.
  
  Merlin.
  
  Gringotts visit with Griphook.
  
  Finding out he's the heir of Gryf and absolutely loaded.
  
  Getting a Staff.
  
  I honestly don't believe you could fit anymore cliche's into this story.

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-05-21

  Good chapter. Write what you feel and those that don't like it can read something else.
  
  gunny

• Harry Potter and the New Powers

  (#) buddamacca 2008-09-16

  I noticed in a previous chapter that you had asked for no flames when we review, so please look upon this as constructive critisism.
  
  please have a beta-reader or stop writing, you need to set a story flow, a timeline and to flesh it out with some details.

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