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• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-05-11

  Fantastic conclusion to a great story. I never knew who to root for in a pairing between Hermione and Blaise, but Luna is always great.
  
  Looking foward to the sequel.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Cateagle 2008-05-11

  The rebuilding process looks to be quite prolonged for him with, for now, all new challenges (not that he really wanted the first batch when Fate returned him to the past). I do hope Luna and, quite possibly (if all are in agreement), Hermione can join him in his efforts and in his life. I suspect Rufus is going to be hunting him and not having too much success, either.
  
  Now, those who took his clone appear to be Unspeakables and 'twill be interesting to see their agenda and goals and how they conflict with Harry's; the fact that they've absconded with the body of his clone isn't going to help his mood/attitude toward them.
  
  All in all, a good warp-up to the first story and scene setting for a sequel.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) stealacandy 2008-05-11

  
  A couple of typos:
  
  Ginny acted, not atacked, and be that as it may, not me.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) stealacandy 2008-05-11

  
  A couple of typos:
  
  Ginny acted, not attacked, and be that as it may, not me.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) issabissa 2008-05-12

  I Loved the whole story!!!! It is a very unique spin and something that I have yet to see. Keep up the great work! I am very much looking forward to reading the sequel to this wonderful story!

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) dennisud 2008-05-14

  What can I say, alot of action, drama and a bit of romance. I wondered throughout the story Whether he's end up with Hermione, Blaize or Luna but hey I like them all!
  
  Still that clone at the end was brilliant yet I am a bit apprehensive with the sequel.
  
  Hope you don't let too many close to harry die, and on Blaze's daeth, I would have allowed Ginny or Ron to be closer and allow their sacrifice to go, yet I see how Blaize's death did hammer Harry!
  
  dennisud

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) selenepotter 2008-06-28

  now that I've finnished it, I must say that I prefered the earilier humorous chapters to the later ones.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Jimbocous 2008-06-29

  Very nicely done. Didn't quite know what to make of the earlier chapters, as I felt the wisecracking nature detracted from an otherwise very solid premise, but all it all it balanced out nicely at the end. Looking forward to the sequel. THanks for a great read!

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Dragen 2008-07-03

  Oh another great chapter and a great end mate, this story has been the bext yet. I like that the older Harry was the one that was in control for so long, but thanks to the younger Harry he was able to make friends.
  
  I like the talk with Harry and Luna where Luna learns the truth.
  
  Poor Harry, his name won't be cleared any time soon.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) darenel 2008-11-10

  Bloody Brillant in the words of Ron Weasley King Of The Suck Ups

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