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Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) retardedrockstar 2008-05-14
This is the best chapter of the story so far.
By the way, when did you start posting on FF.NET. I only noticed it today.
Good Luck!
R.R.Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) Dragen 2008-05-14
Great chapter mate, though don't get this wrong mate, but the one time I thought Harry would cry and yet he didn't. Seeing his parent's portrait and talking to them, is one time I thought he WOULD cry.
I wonder what the new Patronus does.
Keep up the great work mate and update soon, could you make the chapters longer please.Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) michae1ange1o 2008-05-14
Now this is a good chapter. I'm glad he's finally stopped sobbing at the drop of a hat, that was kind of annoying, sort of reminded me of emo guy off the movie Bedazzled.
The golden patronus of the Dementor killing kind?Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) biged78 2008-05-14
Good Chapter, a little longer and better written. Good job!Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) guamja 2008-05-23
Good story so far....The chapters are alittle short...Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2008-05-25
Good chapter, and good interaction with parents and with Merlin. I'm curious when you're going to have him use the new spell and what it will do with Dementors.
I was just thinking, with you have Harry as the heir of the founders and Merlin, you've not establish proof. I don't recall reading anything about a Signet ring for any of the families. You might want to include that.
Geovanni LucianoHarry Potter and the New Powers
(#) theblackadder 2011-07-13
Sadly one of the most cliched train wrecks of all time - how about some original for once?
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