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As soon as Harry Potter and Cedric Diggory get teleported away from Hogwarts during the third task of the Triwizard Tournament Harry gets infused with another Harry Potter from a diffrenet dimmensi...
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Harry Potter and the Ultimate Warrior.
(#) red_jacobson 2008-05-13
fairly interesting beginning; but way too short. Hopefully the next chapter will be a great deal more fleshed out. This one just left more questions than answers
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(#) skytime12 2008-05-13
this story has patincal please keep wrighting
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(#) michae1ange1o 2008-05-13
heh, it's Desert not dessert... unless Wormtail was shot with pudding. Will Harry be nicknamed Dirty Harry now?.
One small criticism, unless the fic is a Devil may Cry cross, Desert Eagles look pretty but are nicknamed wrist breakers for a reason, not to mention the crap aim, low ammo and 30% chance to jam, no professional fighter would be cought dead with one... or he would be found .. well... dead.
Besides this there are reletively few gun slinging Harry fic's and would like to see where this goes. NiceHarry Potter and the Ultimate Warrior.
(#) Cateagle 2008-05-13
Definitely an interesting and attention-grabbing start. I'll be interested in seeing where you go with this. I'll tend to agree with the above reviewer about Desert Eagles, they've got right nasty recoil and are rather bulky items. IMHO, he'd be better off with a well-tuned and fitted out set of M1911s in at least .45ACP using +P+ rounds at a minimum. Lots more reliable and easier to get parts for, ammo's more readily available, too. Methinks Albus isn't going to like a "gunslinger" running 'round his school and I can imagine how his being armed will go over among the muggles given then current attitudes in Great Britain.Harry Potter and the Ultimate Warrior.
(#) Vegito786 2008-05-14
I agree with what you're saying but these desert eagles are custom made so they can aim propery if the person is strong enough plus this harry has a lot more strength so he can handle the power of the guns.
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