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Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) Balquao 2008-05-20
Wow.......you just suck large donkey balls. The sex scene blew chunks, the story is rushed, your spelling skills are sub-par, you grammar skills should remain un-mentioned, your chapters are waaaay too short, and there are so many of the HP cliches that I'm not even getting started.
That said, please continue.Harry Potter and the New Powers
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2008-05-25
Too short. I think that you have yourself an uberfan in justblaise. The letter to Tom was nice and the heading of Mr. Riddle was priceless.
Geovanni Luciano
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